Post by DDanielle DDiLorenzo on Aug 17, 2011 23:21:44 GMT -5
All right everyone, your results are coming from DD this time around, instead of Amanda. I'm happy to inform all of you that no one will be removed and/or self voting this round! Without further ado, let's get to the results!
First and foremost, there are two people who started the challenge, but were unable to complete it. Those are...
Adam, you had multiple computer issues but still managed to get some good shit up there. No chance at immunity, but you can still vote this round. Amber, it's great to still see some fight from you.
Now we'll evaluate Chase, who would be the lone fighter of one immunity necklace for the jury. Chase, we felt as though your story lost a lot of points on the fact that you gave away the ending before the game even began. That left little suspense for us readers. However, you made up some points on intangibles with your edits and memory wall. Between the three judges, your score was...
Still 6 more to go. It's anyone's game!
Up next... Ashley!
Ashley, we all thought your story was great. Fun concept, with awesome twists, players and episodes. There was a nice use of just about everything, and it was truly something that I'd love to watch on television.
Your score was...
Great job, Ashley. Currently, our immunity holders are Ashley and Chase, with 144 and 90 respectively. Let's see how Natalie stacks up!
Natalie, we thought while your idea was a tad unoriginal, there was some good gameplay; however the choice of characters was... off. As was some of their futuristic decisions, such as Beyonce on drugs? Yeah, no. Anyway, your score turned out to be...
That means Ashley and Natalie are now in the lead for immunity. Sorry Chase, looks like no one from the jury is getting immunity this time.
Next up, Barbie!
Barbie, I think all the judges agree that your story was good. But that's about all it was. Just good. There were no exceptional qualities, but nothing seemed extremely lacking, either. In the end, your score turned out to be...
Sorry, but that's not enough to put you past Ashley or Natalie, so you're out of it.
Next up, Chad
Chad, your story was more or less in the same league as Barbie's. It wasn't anything great, but it was solid. However, there are a lot of points to gain/lose in minor areas. So let's see if you were able to pass Natalie... Your score was...
Close! But sorry, that puts you out of the running for immunity as well.
There are two contenders left to weigh in! Parvati and Misty! Currently Ashley and Natalie hold immunity. Let's see how Parvati did.
Parvati, your story had the most creative characters by far. Also, some great one-liners were in there, as well as Lividmanda. You had some MAJOR grammar issues which lost you points, but us judges thought you still did a great job. Your score is...
Congrats, that's enough to put yourself in the top 2! Ashley, with only one fanfic left to grade, and yours being the highest, you will be immune at tribal council. The last necklace is between Misty and Parvati!
Let's see how Misty did.
Misty, your efforts were great. We all found your story entertaining, and there was some great writing in there. I can disclose that you beat Natalie, but it's unknown if you beat Parvati. In the end, your score was...
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Misty, I still think you did a great job. Third is nothing to be ashamed of on a challenge like this.
Ashley and Parvati, congrats, you have both guaranteed yourself spots in the final 5. Adam, Misty, Barbie, Natalie and Chad, you each have a 2 in 5 shot of going home. Best of luck to each of you. Head back to camp, tribal will be up shortly.
First and foremost, there are two people who started the challenge, but were unable to complete it. Those are...
Amber and Adam
Adam, you had multiple computer issues but still managed to get some good shit up there. No chance at immunity, but you can still vote this round. Amber, it's great to still see some fight from you.
Now we'll evaluate Chase, who would be the lone fighter of one immunity necklace for the jury. Chase, we felt as though your story lost a lot of points on the fact that you gave away the ending before the game even began. That left little suspense for us readers. However, you made up some points on intangibles with your edits and memory wall. Between the three judges, your score was...
90/150
Still 6 more to go. It's anyone's game!
Up next... Ashley!
Ashley, we all thought your story was great. Fun concept, with awesome twists, players and episodes. There was a nice use of just about everything, and it was truly something that I'd love to watch on television.
Your score was...
144/150
Great job, Ashley. Currently, our immunity holders are Ashley and Chase, with 144 and 90 respectively. Let's see how Natalie stacks up!
Natalie, we thought while your idea was a tad unoriginal, there was some good gameplay; however the choice of characters was... off. As was some of their futuristic decisions, such as Beyonce on drugs? Yeah, no. Anyway, your score turned out to be...
104/150!
That means Ashley and Natalie are now in the lead for immunity. Sorry Chase, looks like no one from the jury is getting immunity this time.
Next up, Barbie!
Barbie, I think all the judges agree that your story was good. But that's about all it was. Just good. There were no exceptional qualities, but nothing seemed extremely lacking, either. In the end, your score turned out to be...
102/150!
Sorry, but that's not enough to put you past Ashley or Natalie, so you're out of it.
Next up, Chad
Chad, your story was more or less in the same league as Barbie's. It wasn't anything great, but it was solid. However, there are a lot of points to gain/lose in minor areas. So let's see if you were able to pass Natalie... Your score was...
101/150
Close! But sorry, that puts you out of the running for immunity as well.
There are two contenders left to weigh in! Parvati and Misty! Currently Ashley and Natalie hold immunity. Let's see how Parvati did.
Parvati, your story had the most creative characters by far. Also, some great one-liners were in there, as well as Lividmanda. You had some MAJOR grammar issues which lost you points, but us judges thought you still did a great job. Your score is...
136/150!
Congrats, that's enough to put yourself in the top 2! Ashley, with only one fanfic left to grade, and yours being the highest, you will be immune at tribal council. The last necklace is between Misty and Parvati!
Let's see how Misty did.
Misty, your efforts were great. We all found your story entertaining, and there was some great writing in there. I can disclose that you beat Natalie, but it's unknown if you beat Parvati. In the end, your score was...
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125/150!
ASHLEY AND PARVATI WIN IMMUNITY
Misty, I still think you did a great job. Third is nothing to be ashamed of on a challenge like this.
Ashley and Parvati, congrats, you have both guaranteed yourself spots in the final 5. Adam, Misty, Barbie, Natalie and Chad, you each have a 2 in 5 shot of going home. Best of luck to each of you. Head back to camp, tribal will be up shortly.
